Introduction to The Perfect Escape

Two weeks into the quarter, I wrote my first Major Homework Assignment entitled, "The Perfect Escape". It is a descriptive paragraph. The lake was the perfect subject to write about, and I was comfortable writing it because I love nature. Camping or fishing during summer were a big events for me. This the first paragraph that I actually use descriptive words and phrases like for example, "Roaring like an angry beast, twisting, turning, furiously pounding endlessly through the rocks, the water continues its endless journey down the mountain". I chose this piece because I think I did an excellent job in using descriptive words and phrases, and I considered this writing the best.